My name is Mitchell Cairns, I am 42 years old,
I have a wife named Ray...Rachael. We have been married for 15 years.
I have two daughters named Rebecky, no Rebecca, Becky! and Cyn...Cynthia, no that's not it. Sid. Sydney! My second daughter's name is Sydney and she is 11 years old.
I have been selling insurance for 17 years.
We live on a hill.
It has grass.
I remember a dog but I don't think it's ours. It barks a lot.
Damn dog.
I work, I have a wife, I HAVE KIDS!
I HAVE A LIFE.
WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!?
I AM NOT A BABY
I'M NOT! I'M NOT! I'M NOT!
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Awesome story!!! I like the short clipped paragraphs. The structure lends to the struggle, so to speak.
I am thinking that this guy was reincarnated, only he remembers a lot about his former life. I also think that what he does remember lends to what is important to him, namely family. The blurry stuff is stuff way down on the priority list. I also get the feeling that as a reader, the mystery is unfolding for me exactly how you want it to, I don't think I am ahead of the story as it unfolds. Nice work, TWP.
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